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Mark entry and turning points
Draw the route at room scale and place likely stopping points. At each one, trace which displays become visible and what competes for attention.
Draw a route entering near a corner display and moving across to a larger object. Keep the full source available while you work on the smaller passage or feature. Its surroundings may give a movement, choice of wording or visual pattern a different role from the one it seems to have by itself. Mark the place you started and check how the source leads you into it.
The exhibition turn
An introductory label placed beside the entrance may be skipped by visitors facing the larger piece. Test an interpretation by describing what the audience would see or hear before the detail arrives. A change is often easiest to understand in relation to an expectation already established. Name the part of the work that encouraged that expectation, then describe the moment when it became harder to sustain.
Mock up the labels
Put temporary cards at the planned heights and read them from the positions the sketch suggests. Move them where a standing reader would block the next stop.
A crowd at the first label can hide floor space that appeared clear during setup. Choose one example that can carry the explanation on its own. Keep the source credit or recording location and describe how to find the detail. If you use an edited excerpt, indicate where it begins and ends so another person can return to the wider work and see whether it supports the same interpretation.
Explore another reading of the exhibition turn
Mock up the likely standing area with two people reading at once. Let the original sequence remain visible alongside any reference diagram. Alternating beats, changing placements and repeated words are easy to lose when examples are regrouped by subject. A timecode, page location or first-and-last image lets another person put the marked detail back into its original order.
Put the exhibition turn in context
Ask a first-time visitor to trace the point where they first understood the exhibition sequence. Write down the point at which your read or impression changed. Compare it with the first thing you saw or heard. This often reveals a more interesting sequence than a list of features, because it shows what the source let you assume early and what became clear only after you spent longer with it.
The second trial for the exhibition turn
To share the example, begin with where a person can find it and give one moment to listen for or inspect. Follow with the detail you think changes the interpretation. If a competing reading accounts for a feature you overlooked, make it part of the discussion and consider what additional evidence would help settle the disagreement. Return to the version you used and verify anything a reader could mistake for a quotation or exact description. Keep the wording distinguishable from your own. A practice note might be a simple numbered sketch or timestamp with a few words underneath. What matters is whether it takes a new reader quickly to the evidence. Print labels in a temporary readable size before running the sightline trial. A placeholder too small to read gives a false impression of attention. Place one clear example and one less obvious example next to each other. The precise feature you noticed may occur more than once while playing a different role in its second setting. This can help you say what depends on the chosen moment and what belongs to a wider habit of the work.